Blog 3

I will try to change a bit of the writing so that it will not have my opinion based on the subject that I am writing about. I will change part of my conclusion, and I will re read to find any grammar errors and sentences that do no flow really well. I will also work on the second paragraph to make it shorter. I will add some more materials to make sure that I have enough wording to meet the quota, and work on my works citied page.